The first poem was a cool thing Mike told me about. You pick six words, and create six regular stanzas, where each line ends with one of those words. The last word of the final line becomes the last word of the first line of the next stanza, until you go through all of them. The final stanza has two of the words per line, one in the middle and one at the end.
The second poem is perhaps the most complex of any poem I've ever written. It can be read left to right, as usual, and you can also read it from top to bottom of each row. Snazzy, isn't it? It's also the poem that took me the longest to write, taking an entire class period in high school (which is about an hour and a half long).
Death, Love,
Pain, Hope: To Burn
All we have
for all eternity is love,
At least
until we have seen death,
But even
then we yearn and hope
For
something to end this pain;
For
something to make the memories burn
Into
something we can cling to.
Somehow we end
up going back and forth, to
And fro,
trying to start or end our love.
We try to
keep the flame or stop the burn
For the
accomplishment of either deters death
And brings a
way to extinguish pain.
This, it
seems, is the foundation of hope.
Yet to have
anything resembling hope
Makes it
that much more likely to
Have this
feeling we call pain.
It is caused
by, and ended by, love.
The lure of
emotion makes us feel invisible to death
When all it
achieves is bringing us to Hell to burn.
Many argue
that we do not burn
Because they
see their feelings as a hope
For
something beyond life and death.
They yearn
for Heaven and here on earth seem to
Have and
receive this thing called love
And do not
see that from it springs pain.
Is it worth
it, this pain?
It scratches,
it stings, it stabs, it creates a burn
That makes
me feel that love
Is not
something for which to hope.
And yet,
without it, there would be nothing to
Treasure and
value at the time of death.
So, in
conclusion, this death,
Both a way
to end and create pain,
Serves as
the only thing to
Prove that
there is a reason to burn,
A reason to
hope,
A reason to
bear this horrible thing called love.
And so we
learn to see that with death
There is
love for something despite the pain
And we adore
the burn that means we hope.
St. Croix
Gone-
All that's left behind
Is nothing that really
Matters.
To another
place that
Goes beyond him and me
At least that's how it seems,
Will drive
him farther until he is
Truly gone?
Forgotten,
forgiven, forgetting, forgiving
Or maybe not at all.
For the
truth of feelings is not true.
Perhaps it never really mattered
Perhaps this end is for the best
Because he never cared;
Though if an end it be
This truth
of heart cannot be denied, yet
What an end to such bliss.
If such a lie as feelings
To believe
is perfidy and
Kill the soul
Of this
heart inside my chest,
Then there is nothing.
It is dead.
Love these.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alexandra :)
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